Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Why Not Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every night before I went to sleep i would pray
and ask god to make you mine
But the thought zoomed through my head
Why Not Me
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Yulissa Fregoso
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John Knight 04 November 2009

Hi Yulissa - 'Why not Me' A lovely evocative title for a lovely poem by a very very lovely Young Lady - for that I will open the score with a TEN. I love V 1 - If you love someone it's OK to ask the LORD to promote the relationship! V 2 We all need priorities Yulissa - GRADES are almost as importat as LOVE. V 3 WHY NOT ME? You are so so lovely - Beautiful & Brainy so set your sights high a look for someone who is MUY GUAPO (como mi pero mas mas joven!) V 4 We must make the best of ourselves - externally but also internally. If the 'man in question' only looks on the external - then he is the LOSER because he missed your loving HEART. We all see your lovely Poetic Heart - Yulissa - and we all love you. I am honoured to be the first to comment. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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