Why Not Anymore? Comments

Real poetry - bursting with emotion, truth and beauty. You have a real gift.10+!

This one too painfully beatifull! but it made me sad! really loved one when emits hurt its painful! Flow is astonishing bcoz it came out from the bottom of heart. 10++++

very sad ending, but awesomely written and wonderfully expressed.

A sweet composition. Nice.

wow it's really touch my heart, i give u 10/10

I read this craft of yours once again, it really moves me. I believe you've done one swell job finding a way to act out your confusion and I did the same thing.

Splendid for sure. For what it's worth, this is something I call 'common ground', meaning I went through the same stage at one time but now I'm so over it. I once came to ask myself the very same question but then again I got the answer over time. It's just that 'the other person' doesn't give a hoot how we feel, and our loving doesn't mean nothing to them, no to worry, though. Life goes on, so chin up and charge ahead. Wish you all the best.

i loved the emotion behind this poem.i think not any more coz love is not the same any more

one moment you 're enjoying your life, the next moment you wondering how you ever live without them. people change but love stays the same. well done

although sad; this is a shiny poem from a shining girl. continue to shine, star

woah, it was soo soo sensitie and romantic.i enjoyed it.it was a jewel

Beautiful words strung together with a common harmony. Life grants no guarantees as 'Time and unforseen occurrences' affect us all. Sometimes we lose that which we thought would never leave us; we hope, wish and yearn for it, not realizing that perhaps what we wanted in our lives was only there to prepare us for what we truly need. Be Well **10** N8

love is present to us by god; paying the penalty of love is present to us by us.because love isnt blind; blinds are us

That's so sad, I hope that never happens to me... Why did the love stop, I wonder?

Heart felt Hataw, some times we hurt the ones we love...10