Saturday, November 22, 2008

Why Not? ? ? Comments

Rating: 3.7

Why not take a crazy chance?
Why not do a crazy dance?
Who knows? today maybe your day,
tomorrow may not come your way.
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tanvi damle
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Sumita Datta 18 January 2010

yes, why not.... you have described the fact in this piece of work Tanvi... :)

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Alexandra Puddle 06 December 2008

hae tanvi.. that poem is awesome. i absolutly love it! ! keep on writing :)

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Wow..very catching poem..Well Done!

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Lee Jackson 22 November 2008

fascinating use switching from rhyming form and then back at the end. I like it. Very catching poem. Felt like I was on the edge waiting for the crescendo and then it switched gears into something completely surprising

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Tom Golding 22 November 2008

Nicely expressed images and refreshing to write of making others happy.

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