Thursday, September 22, 2011

Why/My Explanation Comments

Rating: 5.0

You cry and hurt and yet you say you're fine.
I know I'm to blame for every single sigh.
So why am I still here? Why do you hold me close?
Are you worried that I'll wilt, like the single white rose?
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Bernadeth Tolentino
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2019

You cry and hurt and yet you say you're fine. Such activity is so sad and thought provoking. This expresses emotion. Losing sight of lies is so sad, But you can hold life with beauty. This poem is an amazing poem.10

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Monina Furigay 09 October 2011

-.- for whoever is reading this, my part of the poem is the top. I have it uploaded on my own account if you care to rate it.

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Monina Furigay 03 October 2011

-3- you never took out my part, you know....

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Monina Furigay 23 September 2011

You can take out my part of the poem now: p xD i uploaded it now

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