Monday, May 10, 2010

Why Me? Comments

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I am the child that always weeps,
I am the child the never creeps,
I am the child that has no friends,
I am the child that needs many a-mends.
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Kevan brown 30 December 2018

His hart has a soul that pumps inside But by the time he looks inside he crys God bless him the day he he took his fist breath of life He cried...

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A nice poem of child which I enjoyed by recitation.

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Vaishnavi Singh 12 November 2013

Very nice poem. Emotionally touching my heart. Loved it.

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Arissara Jones 14 August 2013

This kinda like me. I have friends but never feel love and always get in trouble and always have to do work it like I'm not a person at all I hate my life

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Nikki Addleton 06 July 2010

this is a very deep poem the repeat of 'i am' is indicated on yourself, a moving but good poem i liked it

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