Why Me? Comments

Wish you best of luck. Mind you my wishes have never gone in vain. (9)

Your poem is full of emotion and despair. I find your last stanza and line especially hauntingly desperate. In my own poem/song Heyyy! Why is life so mean? I wrote Heyyy, Why is Life so Mean? Heyyy, Why are People so Mean? Everyone else's life is always a dream! It's enough to make you want to scream! When the world comes crashing down, it's only on you! It's like the world has nothing better to do! Because we all feel like that sometimes. We all feel like other people have it easy and we have it twice as hard. And it's normal to feel that way but you must never ever think that you should never have been born. No matter how hard your life is, you were given life for a reason, you must find what that reason is even if it takes someplace you didn't know you needed to go.

Sometimes it looks like fate will never give us an helping hand, but sometimes the wait is worth while, a great poem.