They used to come one after one
just like waves of mighty ocean.
Sorrows trespassed human minds
to give us pangs of pain as gifts.
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As ordinary human beings we are supposed to suffer our agonies but withstanding the pressures of routine life only through such positive out look as mentioned in the poem that is hope. A great thoughtful poem indeed.
The theys are relentless sometimes, however it must come to an end at a point. Well battled.
Excellent heartfelt poem with optimistic attitude which is the real essence of the poem. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Let us forget what is gone.Have a positive mind and move ahead.Nice ink.Loved it.
When we are in despair, what positive change, the confident words of a loved one can give! When your dear partner whispered the mantra of life in your ears, you could confidently move forward and all your anxiety, fear and disappointment went away. By words or actions, if one can ignite hope in others, his/her life never goes in vain! A poem quite positive and optimistic!
Mallika - it's a nice penning with full of inspirations and hopes. Yes, we should live with optimism, because our life moves in an one way direction only and never goes back. Hence, no other way besides moving forward. But truly is it like that or else life is full of miseries comprising of losing loved ones, pains of getting defeated, unfulfilled hopes and dreams? ? I truly is in a dilemma.
Do not look back Go ahead with good hope All goodness and peace will soothe YOU as a cool breeze
very well written. Its always better to move forward and not look back. Sorrows and joys, none are permanent, and will stay wtih us forever.
You have written a profound truth. We search for peace within and we don't find it there. But when we see how much more we can give to make others happy, we then find our own. Emerson once said, Only a life lived for others is life lived worthwhile.