Why Me? Comments

For the poeticism [is THAT a word in the dictionary; it should be if it isn't! ] and the fine grammar I give this...hmm? ....4 stars. bri : )

F's A, Do you agree or disagree, I wonder. bri : )

As for being poetic and thought-provoking, I enjoyed the last four lines especially. But, REALLY, things, good or bad, are not equally distributed to all people. Let's face ithe truth. : ) bri

And...you 'see the struggles' and see 'the pain', YET you say they carry the pain 'without a trace'? Hmm? To my mind, at least, you SEEM to have stumbled with 'meaning' while triumphing with rhyme.

stanza 2: this line seems 'out of place'. Understand what I'm saying? 'At all the beauty that surrounds, ' Hmm?

stanza 1: I TRIED to find an idiom e.g. 'play a card' to explain your use of 'Why must I play this kind of a card, ', but I failed. But I'm loving your rhyming. : )

Keep it up broo