When the hopes are hassled
And relationships are rattled
Naïveté asks, why me?
When wishes are whacked
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we never say why me when we achieve something or life gives us all....it becomes why me when there is tragedy or thing do not go as we plan...good peem
Your poem is musical and full of wisdom. Congratulations
i like this poem..it's acc the best thing for me right now..just reading it make me feel better thnx for this lovely poem
Well expressed.I really loved rhymes that you've used through out this poem.Great work.Very interesting poem.Tanks for sharing.
i like....but i dnt ask god why me? i ask my self why me? what did i do now? +10
a person usually never thank God when they are happy, nor do they ask why me, when they get what they want, but only in times of crisis they think of God and sometimes curse God, and ask WHY ME? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
truthful thoughts expressed in a unique presentation...congrats
Sir.. your poem is indeed one of the best I've come across in poemhunter. it exudes grace, innocence very well.
One usually asks this question, 'Why me? ' when one's life full of troubles.
You’ve jockeyed well the emotion horses as jackpot. Ne’er-before-read-experience. I should read it at least 10 times. Ten++ for Wisdom Ms. Nivedita Please visit my page and comment on my poems Sir niv
What a wonderful poem this is. I just realized how fortunate i have been all my life, that whatever troubles i have, they are minimal compare to the blessings i have............Thank you for sharing
So the second stanza teaches how to be significant and outstanding and of top 500...well versed...and ofcourse one of top 500
it balances out doctor... people with influence and affluance, people with health and wealth.... do ask... why me? just scratch the surface... and try to see from near.... everywhere you shall unearth grave insecurities and fear......
this is wha i said that this poem truly i read before..as the beautiful things stay always in the mind..it's songs ring in our ears all the time..i know this poem very well..sweet and it's beauty increase each time..now let me check what i wrote in my previous comment...
an excelent unique so meaningful sweet poem..loved it..............many tens for it
The ryhme is great Dr. and the rythm of the poem is lovely.....and the title is perfect.Actually, it deserves to be from the Top 500 poems! ! ! .........thank you Merna
A unique piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A lovely poem with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.