Thursday, May 7, 2009

Why? ? ? Mammy Why? ? Comments

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I lost u and I don’t know how
I lost u and I don’t know when
Everything disappearing in front of me
I lost the only person that I live for
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Nouri Queen
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hmmmm, similar to my questions, cept for the dying part... there was a mother who left her two year old daughter in a greyhound bus because she thought she was to preety to be a mom.... i ask, why, how, yadayadayada.... everyone dies dear...just as everyone makes stupid decisions... but this is a very heartfelt poem...i heard the weeping voice as i read it.... i took my shoes off and read this in the writers shoes.... veiwed myself as a child of a loving mother, who had no choice but to die and leave her loved one... which brings forth these painful wonders... this kind of role playing allways helps. anyways... nice poem

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