Monday, February 13, 2012

Why Is That Not Now? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where songs and love
And carefree spirit reigned.
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Bette Kayley Jones
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Mark Heathcote 21 June 2012

I have read few poems tonight from people requesting me to so... and your is the first I come across that I like. :)

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Rose Jones 03 March 2012

awwww, is that new? i fink you freeky (die antwoord)

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Von Klassique 28 February 2012

Good write-We 're gonna get there...Cheers!

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Rudeyard Kipling 15 February 2012

It seems to me you are already there. To be so young and so wise....to have lived and found wisdom is no frivolous matter. Just that you have noticed many of the travails of life and desire more/better is a beginning of the path. I think you will go far. Keep writing.....and smile often....even when things don't go as planned.

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Ninja Soul 14 February 2012

Well, one life isn't perfect. It never will be. Two-because we always have to go through trials and heartaches. But yes, that would be nice if life was that simple and perfect.

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Bette Kayley Jones

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