Friday, March 30, 2007

Why Is She Afriad? Comments

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she is so afraid,
afraid of pain,
afraid of joy,
she hides behind her walls,
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Wandering Scarlet
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Tyease Collins 22 June 2008

Why is she afraid? I'm still curious. This poem rox! XoXoXo **Tyease**

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another b-e-a-utiful poem written by you!

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Madly In Love 31 March 2007

Good job Rocco i like the way this poem flowed

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Rocco...Lots of verve & positive energy in this piece...Mellifluously structured...In sync rhythm employed...Solid Work... ~ F.j.c.R. ~

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Anita Blake 30 March 2007

i love this poem, and if this poem is written about who i think i'd say she wonders to and she hates being afraid

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