Thursday, February 23, 2006

Why Is My Heart Surprised? Comments

Rating: 3.4

for my dad, the quiet captain of life


Why is my heart surprised?
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Debora Short
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Adeline Foster 28 June 2011

This is a very good offering here. To tell the truth, I was surprised and moved. Hope you try mine - To Maurice. Adeline

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Ray Lucero 25 February 2006

Debora, Just wanted to share, how your poem inspired my most recent offering dedicated to my Dad, entitled 'RAYMOND'... Thank You, Ray

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Ray Lucero 23 February 2006

Debora, Touching, descriptive and beautiful... Lost my Dad some years ago and I still remember riding the hills of Colorado and Utah with him during summer break. He was the man that initiated me into manhood with the simple organic life of a cowboy. There is not greater joy to a child than loving their Dad. Blessings, Ray

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