Why Is My Book Bag So Heavy Comments
Book bags are essential for school,
I don't care what grade you're in,
The key to success is a well balanced breakfast so that every person can concentrate on their work,
But too many kids come with their tummies growling like a bear,
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This may at times be an important issue to face....or ignore, but, for me, it failed as a 'poem'. And though I had no problem with grammar here at first, I did nearer the ending. bri : )
It's a shame that some students have to go to school hungry. They can't do their best work in that condition.
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7/19/2025 4:23:41 AM # 1.0.0
Your meaning(s) become very hazy for me at the end. ; ( Perhaps a Poet's Notes would help, but I feel a poem, well-construted, should not NEED follow-up notes.