Tuesday, March 15, 2005

Why Is It? Comments

Rating: 4.8

The stars have their twinkle,
The moon it’s mystic light,
But I will never hold you,
Not even for one night.
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william mae
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Lee Ann Schaffer 17 March 2005

This is beautiful and quite well balanced. It's great.

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kenneth william snow 15 March 2005

Nice poem William, one edit though if I may: change your in, 'While your so far away? ', to you're. Very nice, pleasant read. Thanks Kenneth

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Christine Magee 15 March 2005

Beautiful, gentle and an excellent flow. Chrissie

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Shraddha Kinger 15 March 2005

Nice poem =) Keep up the good work.......

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