Monday, June 27, 2011

Why Is It? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it fate that swept me to your heart?
Or yo soothest incantations that torns my weary apart?
Is it your warm fondle,
That makes my heart haven in you and kindle?
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Shamba Kaunda
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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