Thursday, July 5, 2018

Why (Inspired By Born A Slave - Poem By Lungelo S. Mbuyazi) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling you like the aroma of flowers,
thinking someone is peeping out
through the colorful windows
when I fall in love with a rose,
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 08 November 2018

A real fine art work...I enjoyed reading it.... Am so privileged and humbled to have inspired another poet! There it goes on my poem list....

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2018

excellently penned. I offer myself to be the first to be sacrificed

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2018

forgot to rate at plus 100000000000000000

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 July 2018

The size of WISDOM of your poetry is now exceeding the MISSISSIPPI THE NILE THE AMAZON JHELUM AND CHENAB Jumna where about you were born SIR

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

Aroma of flowers motivate mind and we see aromatic beautiful flowers through window. Sometimes we see tear in eyes of emotion. But certainly sooner or later joy and love softly bloom in mind. A brilliant poem is beautifully and excellently penned...10

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