Why I Would Follow Her Like A Puppy Dog Through The Streets Comments

Uriah, if the young knew what dreams they inspired in the middle aged and lonely, I wonder how they would feel? This is a gentle piece of sober reflection without melancholy. Beautifully written and paced. love, Allie xxxx

As you say Uriah, only youth can get away with an ankle bracelet. I agree it would be somehow enticing, to the watchful. Well described piece. Nicely produced. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

This is a lovely poem Uriah. The lack of tension of the subject is reflected well in the manner in whichit is composed. When I first read it missed out the in 'the' in the third line and it felt that it fit. I don't know what you think. All in all this is a beautifully crafted piece.

Dream on gentle poet