Monday, October 7, 2019

Why I Was Born Comments

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I was from drugs and temptation
And also from anger and frustration,
I was from dares and also a weakness
And also from pressure and a meekness.
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Aniruddha Pathak 08 October 2019

Beautiful and bold as well, all possible reasons birth takes place not out of love. And written well, I must say.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2019

Wonderful perception. A child was born after his mother's raping by a man who was on drugs and temptation. You have so beautifully begun the poem like...I was from drugs and temptation / And also from anger and frustration, / I was from dares and also a weakness / And also from pressure and a meekness...... Fantastic really. A sensitive poem is astutely delineated. Thank you a lot dear Randy sir for sharing this gem.10

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Randy McClave

Randy McClave

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