Monday, December 19, 2016

Why! I Still Miss Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Running at pace with sadness and pain,
you gave me so much to hold onto,
even when the cruel world chose to take you from me,
all my last days has grown into coldness and self blame.
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jurgen donald
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Chinedu Dike 10 November 2019

A passionate and concise tale of irreplaceable lost told in eloquent finesse. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Jurgen.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 03 February 2017

Sad and deep. Thanks for sharing.

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Annette Aitken 20 December 2016

Jurgen this is such a heartfelt write, you can feel the pain withun your words, very sad indeed, very nicely penned. Annette

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