Friday, July 15, 2011

Why I Need To Cry And Have God In The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.7

Once I was sitting under the tree.The sun sit in a muddy spring.
The flowers were crying beside me. And a bird wounded his wing.
I raised my sight, awh what I see... A storm and great thundering.
I worried, what will happen to me. I was lost in a mysterious ring.
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Abdallah Gamal
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Deodatus Agricola 29 November 2012

wow! this is so great buddy! ! i like your rhyming especially the three breaking in the last stanza, congrats and keep it up dear poet! !

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Jessie Hopkins 16 November 2011

This poem can help so many remember God is always there for them. And for that, humanity can never thank you enough. :)

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

I totally agree I too have God so there's no need to cry for long He has away of wiping the tears from are eyes.Thank you Father God! ! ! Thank you for reminding us all that there is a God who cares....

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Chaths Odion 28 July 2011

like the title! ! nice work!

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Esther Ayala 26 July 2011

hey, thanks so much for inviting me to read your poems. Great Poem, Ditto to everybody's comment. I really liked the line 'I remember God, And guess what I found, I've found my life.' Simply put, A solution to all problems, and yet so hard for many to figure it out.

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Christina Phan 24 July 2011

its good poem and god is here for us, that is true. I love and i ask myself same question.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 19 July 2011

Nicely written, much more upbeat than my stuff!

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Jennifer .. 19 July 2011

great pretty poem about having faith :) good job

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Hans Vr 19 July 2011

Very impressive. Nice. Good. Only nice words come to my mind after reading such a huge wisdom, so melodiously expressed. The rhyme in the title is very original. Very well done. When we remember God, ... What you say is sooo true.

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Luz Hanaii 18 July 2011

Shows a lot of self searching and inner reflection. The last two lines wraps up the whole thing and gives the answer to your stated question. Very good!

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Constance K Yost 18 July 2011

Your faith and your poems are beautiful. Keep writing every day as time permits. Good work! Constance Yost

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Santosh Sharma 18 July 2011

One who has faith in God, needs not to worry.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 17 July 2011

When you are at the end of you're wits. When you think it'll never get any better just look up. Another Great Poem.

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I like it. positive poetry! great write!

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Abdallah Gamal 17 July 2011

Of course I thanking Him everyday no every time no every moment for his many blessings on me :)

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Erika Michelle 16 July 2011

this is a very good poem! ! i love the rhyming...are you thanking God?

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John Evans 16 July 2011

Wow that's awesome :) very nice poem with fantastic rhyme :)

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Unwritten Soul 16 July 2011

Cheers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it made my heart feel so happy reading this, a nice heart of yours wrote this to tell a way how to smile for life...that's very niceeeeeee! and you must cry Abdallah, yes u must...you ask me why u need cry? ? ? No No not to cry because of sad thing but cry with happiness as you see sweet thing :) Lantern of smile too :) _Unwritten Soul

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Aqeb Benazir 15 July 2011

Nice poetry! ! This poetry has a very much similar concept with one of mine...'I've cut pain through a knife.' is the similar line from my poetry I posted on my first day (10th July) 'Realm of Reality' where i said 'I’m truly out of words, to express my whole life, It’s so absurd, cut all pain through a knife'... nice work though! liked the story ;) carried a depth too. It's always gratifying to see other people inspire and relate part of their life to yours.

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Diwakar Bhatt 15 July 2011

nice to read.....long way to go...

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