Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, February 18, 2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Anand Brown 13 May 2014

Although you write free verse poems, remember to stick to the rules of free verse poetry. This poem with the question marks is a bit distasteful for a person like me who loves Literature and is a student thereof.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

Maya Dearth He may be gossiping and spending time with pleasure Here I am not at ease and burning with desire Whole body is in flames and fire is not seen What type of disease is love” who has no medicine? .... so many verses of wisdom here... always so much revelation in your poems ?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

« Delete » janifer very good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

Kobkaew S. Excellent! Thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

? ???? ?.-'?-.. nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

...??? ??? ?... Lovely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2012

Deletejadia4708au Ñ|†å|-|@GåÜ¢|.. thank you dear Hasmuck nice poem..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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