Why I'M Cold Comments
People say I’m cold
Cause here feelins aint felt
If there’s something needs to be done
Better do it your damn self
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I like that you wrote your words as they would be spoke. It adds to the piece. I also enjoyed reading a poem of unbiased apathy. It goes against the grain of everything percieved as 'right'. The fact that you give no excuse, makes it even better. I think we all feel this way sometimes. We just won't admit it. Brilliant!
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7/19/2025 4:54:14 AM # 1.0.0
MR R is a very talented writer too lol