I love you because you're the other half
that makes me whole,
when we're apart
I feel helpless and out of control,
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A nice love poem. The flow is fluent and natural. Congratulations, Bernard, on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! Well done!
Love is such a wonderful feeling that makes all the difference in a relationship. Thanks, Bernard. when we're apart / I feel helpless and out of control, when I'm with you / I'm completely secure / and I feel very, very special,
What you've said is just the right length. A very beautiful love poem which will bring you even closer together. an excellent choice for poem of the day. Congratulations on that, Bernard. Tom Billsborough
Congratulations Bernard on being chosen as poet of the day, so well deserved a beautiful poem that flows with joy, love and great passion oozing with true love an eternal gift!
Very nice, Bernard. Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!
The other half too should be feeling same way as you do, I presume. Mutual understanding is what is essential in a shared life. Tanks very much for sharing a very sentimental poem. X
Though it is good to read but not unique......it seems to me a copy of John Done...... I know it may not be true because you might have not read or heard of Donne.....but as I read him it does not seem to me the presentation unique.........sorry to say this. But from my knowledge of Donne though little..compel me to call conscience........ Thank you for taking it as usual and friendly discussion........nurul
Good job.....you don't want to write but making love.......congrats..... Go forward....abig 10
The other half that makes me whole! ! Nice work. Glad to have your poem as, poem of the day. Mine was read on the 8th of February this year.
Wowww. beautiful poem on love. Very smooth flow of words. Congrats on poem of the day.
I love you because you're the other half that makes me whole, Yes, that's love. Thanks for the beautiful poem.10 for it. Subhas
Nice way to say why I love you, Congrats for the Poem of the day by member.
Too artificially romantic for my taste. If that is what some readers like, I say, Taste-buds differ, in literature as on the palate. I defer to the readers, even as I differ from some.
Superb love poem. Heartiest Congrats for composing it as also on it's selection as member Poem of the Day.
I love the simplicity and beauty this poem resonates.....
A well articulated love poem nicely penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
the half I'm always indeed everywhere I've come here to fulfill myself cause I know the another half is you o love/// beautiful loving expression