Thursday, May 18, 2006

Why I Can'T Be With You Comments

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I paint my face so no one will see
the ugliness that I see in me

But you say you saw my beauty shine through
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Lynnie Kim
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Katie P 16 December 2007

I really like it! If 1 tells you that you are beautiful, it starts to build that confidence. Trust that one person in what they say, & build your confidence, it's not easy, but it's definitely do-able. Good Write!

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Brian Dorn 28 January 2007

Great write, Lynnie... brilliantly worded and 'beautifully' composed! ! Brian

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 18 May 2006

Great poem! If others see beauty in you then you should see it too- everything is in confidence! Love is blind. Keep up the good work :)

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