Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Why I Am Stuck Behind? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Is the clock stopped
Or running behind
Or am I stuck
for the moment.
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Geetha Jayakumar
COMMENTS
Jesse Ellsbury 16 July 2013

I really like the progression and language, and the message of being noticed and its effect on our emotions.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 July 2013

emotions from the first proposal surely lands us in nowheres land! great write, poet.

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Hazel Durham 10 July 2013

You have expressed your delight in a wonderful way that captures a great moment!

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Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

Seventh heaven-ecstasy/ a good poem! !

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Gajanan Mishra 09 July 2013

I am in the seventh heaven, good thought, thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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