do you ever wonder
if heaven is really that far,
and if you can get there by boat, plane or car,
some people say is way up there
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I see the confusion in this poem. I think your mother's death may have got you thinking, I love the way you depicted the way people think of how you can get into Heaven. Truthful.
This is a wonderful poem makes me think a lot. I always did wonder how fall heaven is from here.. I love the part it says about the north star it fits the poem perfect.. this is a great piece nice work Krista
Your mother didnt have to pray because the angels knew what was in her heart! that is how you get to heaven. I like the way you presented this age old delemma
God loves us all the time even sinners bcuz we r all his children. but the diffrence between sinners and Christians is that Christians ask for forgiveness and recieve it.
I love this, the words are powerful, rhymes are good, flow is amazing... the meaning of the poem is strong and clear i love it.. you are a wonderful writting and very strong keep up the good work
That's the same thought I had back then when my grandma died.. Nice, thanks for sharing..
Jose, ...and I was told 'The meek shall inherite the earth! ....Search for truth! Dorothy
This is a very nice poem and meaningful. Keep up the writing! ! ! Thanks for sharing
Symbolic Truth unveiled in the poem, Thanks for sharing, Good 2009.
good write, sat.jan.3 my grandma died. think she could get to heaven with just a good heart?
Though i don't believe in god, This was a really good poem. To wonder and not know then to experience, that is true knowledge.