Saturday, January 3, 2009

Why Heaven? . Comments

Rating: 4.5

do you ever wonder
if heaven is really that far,
and if you can get there by boat, plane or car,
some people say is way up there
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Sans Serif 11 September 2009

Though i don't believe in god, This was a really good poem. To wonder and not know then to experience, that is true knowledge.

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Thomas Coltrin 10 March 2009

i dont believe in god or anything but i liked the poem.....

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Kerrial Newham 11 February 2009

intresting concept. like the beginning.

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Seraphine Belle 30 January 2009

I see the confusion in this poem. I think your mother's death may have got you thinking, I love the way you depicted the way people think of how you can get into Heaven. Truthful.

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Nikkie C 29 January 2009

It was good but stange

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Gargi Saha 22 January 2009

A wonderful poem...................

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This is a wonderful poem makes me think a lot. I always did wonder how fall heaven is from here.. I love the part it says about the north star it fits the poem perfect.. this is a great piece nice work Krista

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John Fieldson 14 January 2009

Your mother didnt have to pray because the angels knew what was in her heart! that is how you get to heaven. I like the way you presented this age old delemma

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(: God's Wild Child :) 13 January 2009

God loves us all the time even sinners bcuz we r all his children. but the diffrence between sinners and Christians is that Christians ask for forgiveness and recieve it.

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Scarred Unknown 10 January 2009

I love this, the words are powerful, rhymes are good, flow is amazing... the meaning of the poem is strong and clear i love it.. you are a wonderful writting and very strong keep up the good work

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Mamor Adi P 09 January 2009

That's the same thought I had back then when my grandma died.. Nice, thanks for sharing..

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Jose, ...and I was told 'The meek shall inherite the earth! ....Search for truth! Dorothy

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Luis Alvarado 07 January 2009

This is a very nice poem and meaningful. Keep up the writing! ! ! Thanks for sharing

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Vinod Kumar 06 January 2009

Symbolic Truth unveiled in the poem, Thanks for sharing, Good 2009.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 05 January 2009

i loved this poem, nice imagery in it

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good write, sat.jan.3 my grandma died. think she could get to heaven with just a good heart?

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Jim Norausky 03 January 2009

Good write. Profound. Keep writing. Jim

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