Why Have You Left Me? Comments

A wonderful poem! x

Fictitious it may be, but still very powerful. It grabbed me from the start and would not let me go. Wonderful work.

: ) bri xxxxxx

A boundless emptiness often fills my space The question –‘What next’ stares at my face Yet never shall I yield, but shall bravely sail Hoping, we together shall meet at the Golden Dale....touching expression with a bright hope. Beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for shaing.

In this turbulent sea! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a great imagination by the poetess on loneliness and longing to meet again. Nicely written,10+++

Wonderfully worded.my friend!

What else a man can do? If someone very dear and necessary for our life is no more, we can only expect to meet him on the Golden Gate.

a beautiful poem the last two stanzas are a perfect ending to the poem. excellent writing

i agree the 'note' is appreciated (though not needed for my enjoyment) and the whole poem is a pleasure to read. i especially enjoy that you use rhymes. i put the poem and you in my 'lists'. someday when i 'have more time' or just am unable to spend my time differently i hope i will be able to look into my 'lists' and enjoy more poems by you and others. you did not answer my previously asked question what kind of professor are you? , but that's ok. thanks for sharing. bri

I heard the pain.It is very tough to stay away from dear one.Superb!

A boundless emptiness often fills my space The question –‘What next’ stares at my face deduce to be with lonelyness

A beautifully crafted poem that although sad was a joy to read. Well done.

reads like a ballad that tells a story, it has great flow and pastoral scene and scent.thanx

Great storyline with insightful plot, with rhymes, it just stun every mind who captures this melody with words_Soul

songs of innocence, rainbows. songs of experience, rain clouds. wonder becomes ponder. you've woven all these together with masterful craft. thank you for these tears.

An exquisite poem rendered with such excellence, though fanciful and fictitious is very stimulating, ! The poem held me spell bound with its musical flow rhyme and rhythm.Simply great, Valsa!

Beautiful Valsa, very romantic and inspired, and a delightful read. Well done.

this is wonderful poetry.wish there should be no end to it.very nice.

thnk god its fictitious but a marvellous write as alwyas...njoied reading it....