Why hack my mind?
I can be bare and nude.
Why do hush-hush eye scallop?
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I agree to Kelsey Hartmann.Strong wordings to suit the theme.
This is a deep showing of your disgust at being taken advantge of. If we have you, why exploit you. This is great but I ask you to let me know if my inerpretation is even close
The protest is bold but somewhere it reminded me of Taslima Nasreen's use of bare words sometimes bordering round obscenity or vulgarity. Literature, or more specifically, poetry should imply more leaving it upon the reader to conjure the meaning. Same ideas could have been expressed using more subtle words.
Stop hacking Stop itching Stop scooping Stop scoping. good writings.
a bold and honest poem. good attitude.thanks for sharing. enjoyed reading it. love & regards surya.
this is about the women's right to freely express herself not only mentally but physically. I like the reference of the most fertile land on earth. you have only to ask the question 'am I ready for this? '
Your pen is more and more mightier than any sword or weapon. The world needs to be changed and you are on front line to change the world.
Nice piece of writing, though very romantic in tone, I like the soft rhymes that back it up. well done!
Nudity is a form of beauty created by God. Enjoy it but dare to touch.
my nudtiy stiches its garments in your body'..........................shocking reality
i hardly appreciate your talent to write poems. I hope you are completely expressed the feelings. good job! ! ]]so close[[
: -O Its beyond d limit-ly great... I m goin to become ur fan now....
your style of writing is absolutely original and very strong, i admire how you've discribed it and made it sound so real and happening.great write
This is a poem coupled with originality of style. The poet chastise brutal, heinous, and despicable behaviour of literally raping women in all ways when it is possible to civilly solicit for the same. The poet also refers to mental violation, where men disrobe women for outrageous exploit when they can be allowed to explore! ! Good piece too
So strikingly stark and so truthful. Here I add a stanza from my poem Woman in Sculpture or Poetry- A Mystery, in order to complement your verses: - But I cannot be blind to the emotions that are human And cannot be hard as the hammer and chisel on stone I chisel thy beauty in words and capture in verse that feel A throbbing heart is mine and not one made of steel. [The full version of this poem posted today.
I had to reread it to understand the wording, but once I got used to it, I found it powerful and moving. Great work! Any tips for a young poet?
The poet goes deep into unexplored regions of mystery. Ganga and Yamuna bedecks the bed. Excellent