Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Why God Made The Trees Comments

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For avian friends to sit on a limb,
Inside a vast green sea.
To rest inside as the old day dims,
Thats why God made the trees.
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Juan Olivarez
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Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

A wonderful poem Juan, without trees our world would be a sad place. a great write.

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Smoky Hoss 18 July 2012

You taught me a new word here (thanks!) with avian; Great poem, and the way it all flows together so perfectly is superb. Love (and agree with) that wonderful finish. Your poetry is always so good.

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