Sunday, November 17, 2019

Why Few Things Please Us More Than Lies-Ii Comments

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Men stay married for the same odd reason,
More of commerce moves by the myth of lie,
More nations friends are, for, truths buried, die,
Untruth blossoms whatso be the season.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 14 December 2019

One, here are both, sir Bri, 1680 Why Few Things Please Us More Than Lies-I 11/17/2019 Preview | Edit | Delete | Deactivate 1681 Why Few Things Please Us More Than Lies-Ii 11/17/2019 Preview | Edit | Delete | Deactivate Beware still, the serial number may soon change. Two, Stanza 3, Post truth or most truth, post truth, sir Bri, You may Google about this new side of truth, perhaps the latest addition in dictionary.

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2019

Where, sir, is part ONE! ? ? i looked, futiley. OK, i'll read this part 2. stanza 3: " Post truth" ? Most truth? i'm not quite following this poem, and that is NO lie. [rhymes with bri] Thank goodness, I am one of " today's" men! ! ! I guess, you, " old guy" , are " hip" ** to the changes round about you! ** " Hip is a slang for fashionably current and in the know." bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 December 2019

So sad, I had replied to all yr queries, all of six, and my replies were wiped out. I can only blame my bad luck, what else? If you are particular I'll try later to answer, today I'm washed out.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 December 2019

Dear reader/poet Bri, Hope you found the Part I.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2019

It is the truth that suffers but truth is truth...truth is beauty! An excellent poem sir, brilliantly expressed.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 December 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for the encouraging feedback

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