Sunday, November 17, 2019

Why Few Things Please Us More Than Lies-I Comments

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My hair's turned grey and gone has wisdom tooth,
I'm no more a could not care callow youth,
Yet, not so I know makes me enough wise
As to why few things please us more than lies.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Susan Williams 17 November 2019

A truth angel, who whole life walked uphill, Who, hesitated not truth— to uphold, A crucial moment in life arrived still, And an untruth we call half-truth, was told.- - - - - - - -> I found this intriguing, very intriguing, and compels the reader to continue to the next part! ! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

This is the third time I am trying to put my words here... Dear poet do let me know how the poem as a whole stands (now I will be short) ...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2019

Another brilliant work....second part of this brilliant series...a valuable piece with insightful substance at its core......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2019

This poem captioned as 'Few Things Please us more than Lies' also received many comments earlier, which is now deleted. The revised one, marginally edited, coming in two parts. Thanks for responding with such beautiful comments, Dr Swain.

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