Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Why Feel Bitter When..... Comments

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Why feel bitter when your heart feels pain
Why feel bitter when the sky brings rain
Why feel bitter when you lose all that you own
Why feel bitter if you feel you are alone
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Lyn Paul
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 August 2020

A powerful write with a meaningful message. Hope and the power that comes from within oneself are the forces that we need to combat the bitterness and hardships in life. Yes, life is a circle, there is no door to walk away. A powerful line from a wonderful poem.

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Annette Aitken 21 August 2016

At this moment in time I am, was feeling Bitter, but this poem has inspired me to just let it go...let go of the bitterness. Thank you so much for writting such powerful words.... Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

When our heart feel pain! Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 03 December 2013

... nice message for the readers... liked it...

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A nice write up with two phases. With the apprehensions along with solutions.... very nice

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Danny Draper 23 October 2013

A positive affirmation to resilience and self determination against adversity and defeatist resignation, to stand and breath and face and shape in personal strength, ones own destination.

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