Why Fate Never Meant For Us To Be Together Comments

Beautifully penned.

The fickle finger of fate can be so cruel in our lives we live and lead. Another superb poem filled with bitter truths but asks the question at its fine conclusion. 10++ and many thanks Rose Marie and stay poetry enriched.

'Like day and night We met only At dawn and dusk Only to part' Beautiful analogy. Your poem wrenches out grief touchingly. Excellent poem piece Rose Marie 10+

(3) I tried to think with the great poetess, but then I have become saddest, so tragic for both hearts, just wanna cry-cry and cry......Most beautifully worded and so very touching. This captivating poem, loveliest! Up toMyPoemList..Few days have gone and I am still thinking of this poem. This entchanting theme is like the Classics., dear great poetess. God Bless You

Such beauty in the sadness Of separation Destiny's, cruel devise, The depth and romantic pain In this exceptional poem, Makes you want to cry, Not once but twice..... I really mean it Rose! So touchingly sad... Exceptional work. To my poetic treasure chest.

2) There IS love, but before it can grow deeper, both must part and have own destination. That´s why (you may call it fate) this love could not grow deeper. If this has grown so deep, no one can break this love-chain, I reckon. I tried to think with the poetess.

1) IF I may say, I have come to this conclusion: why is this love not united? Indeed, only God knows. We trust in God´s decision and it´s always the best decision. Unspoken love has never the possibility to be shown during the day and that´s why this love had no chance to grow deeper to each other.

Oh! the Fate love the togetherness or separation soul from soul! liabilities on the fate! or the promiscuous mind! knowing terms on the God or the wanton thought!

Fate is fickle and creates pickles. A wonderful poem with many great lines. My favorite lines: We met only At dawn and dusk.... A totally creative poem. Many thanks for your beautiful comments.

Love and art! ! ! The Creator Almighty knows why! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Days and nights unite at the dawn and dusk, if love is true the lovers will also unite.

Reminds me of the biblical verse Romans 8: 28..... A great poem, dear ate Rose...10++++

A touching poem brilliantly penned. Thanks. anjandev roy.

A very well penned romantic write, quite unique from all your other posts. Enjoyed it and thank you for sharing.10+

Can we ask/The sun, the stars and the moon/To stand still/And unite day and night? Bypassing other beautiful aspects of this wonderful poem on love, I just delve deep into this great inquisition! Superb work.....10

Hi Rose Marie, A lovely piece of poetry. Quite melancholic. A little unlike of you, I Note. But, coming back yo poetry. A remarkable poem, by its poetic standards. Marked for its brevity. Beautiful metaphors augmenting the theme.Very aptly worded. Loved it. If, it has an autobiographical connotation, may God be with you to see you through the difficult times. May He bless your heart with enough strength. Take care.

So brilliantly penned! The para starts on an expected thought, and you half expect something you think, but ends differently, and that is the beauty of this piece. 'Maybe, God knows why, may be, sometimes you wonder if Fate is a kill joy.