Why Dont You See? Comments

Unbelievable heartache felt through these words. thank you so much for sharing

I have read countless 'loss' poems, some of them good, but many of them full of self indulgence. This piece transcends them all, to get real truth on paper is a skill not many possess, you have achieved it here.

thanks so much for the explanatory note, above. and thanks for sharing. if this is true, i can understand the need to blow off steam as you mentioned in you bio. i'm glad you are using writing now instead of drywall.

lovely expressions.........beautiful writing.

lovely expressions.........beautiful writing.

Tiffany, I must say your expression of emotion as its viewed from above and within, I like. Very clear intent and nice easy rhyme and rythme. I applaud your desire to write it out! ! I know... Please keep it up, for yourself and those who read it. Bravo! ! !