Wednesday, July 21, 2010

+why Don'T You Fight For Our Love+ Comments

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Why don't you fight for our love,
Why don't you try to pull me back?
Instead you abandon me,
Your indifference like a slap,
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Kieran J1996
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Celiene Watts 30 July 2010

this is a beautiful poem-very heart warming and thoughtful-amazing work! ! ; D

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The Lost.. 28 July 2010

this is too hard how much u suffer pain.. actually i really feel you cuz i tried pain alot before, but thanks God i got over it :) hope the same for you wonderful indeed..

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Unwritten Soul 22 July 2010

Oh that was deep feeling...I wish u get your heart warmer like before and ur love will be back! I love the way u throw the feeling it is like the wind harshly blow the emotion to the tree..you can see falling leaves fall..that is how deep u have wrote..like it :)

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