Thursday, April 23, 2009

Why Don'T We Care Comments

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Why is this world so cruel?
We should help each other
Not try our best to defeat.
Children abandoned and hurt
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Chiffon Ruffles
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Paige S 23 April 2009

Good poem. Although, punctuation might help to clarify it.

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