Sunday, July 20, 2008
Why Don'T I Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Why don't I do the things I want to do?
My thoughts soar free, but my heart's not true.
A part of me is separate, far and away,
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Matthew Edan Oliver Palma
25 July 2008
why don't you really? ! ! ! truly an enjoyable read.. impeccably penned... peace! uuu
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7/19/2025 3:37:41 PM # 1.0.0
I love the end 'a slippery fish'. I think that is such a brilliant way to express it. Well done. The flow of this poem makes the words just roll off your tongue in an easy motion.