Sunday, January 4, 2009

Why Does The World Resist? Comments

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Why does the world resist?
We are flung together on this earth
On this great hurtling planet
Flying through space
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Katie Pierce
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Keith Hendrickson 05 January 2009

another great piece. cant wait to see more from you

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A qualitaitve question that demans an answer. Yet everyone must touch it with the fingerprint of uniqueness.Keep writing.

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Jackie Lively 04 January 2009

wow that's not half bad i like it it has a good vision with it and it is worded together most excellently. Keep writing! Total 9

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Cory Jensen 04 January 2009

i like it...i often wonder why things don't go the way we want..the way we planned. seems like your talking about how love takes it own course but is blocked by the world. That the world needs love, but is resisting it. 10

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