Why Does Loneliness Weep In Wisdomful Silence Comments

beautiful poem excellent write

Marvelous write! So poetic and full of beautiful expressions. In the silence of night many questions and longings arise. One is wondering about our connection to this objective world and its maker.

A very heartfelt write, and a lovely title, well written Naseer 10 Lynda xx

Laughter is not always for fun..soemtimes we mask our sorrows by having a laugh...I gues when you are alone thats when you tend to take this mask off...so floodgates open. 8/9/09

Why Does Loneliness Weep In Wisdomful Silence? After having wed twice, my first love lost by cancer, and; second divorced for the lack of communication. Baren after 45+ years of bed-warmth and restless companionship had led to ill tidal weaping lonliness, This may help many as it has myself become a mantra, Self revealing of a muse of my own 'Self' be friend. ALONE - - with myself if I do not see, another side, a side of me One of mind, of no other kind A friend I find, who's alone in my mind. He or She, speaks to me. 'If I a friend to be, then not alone your side will be, If only you will find the friend in me' Best friends we can be, 'Me and Me', Loneliness, is not finding 'Me' (Self revelation after marital desolving) 1989 Louie Levy

My soul is made up Of the Dead Sea The tears which roll down Mixed with salt from my heart Touch my lips and I taste My own bitter loneliness! A very moving poem Which touched my soul And broke my heart As I read on line after line! Angel

A very strong peom but beautifully written. Thanks for sharring it.

And tie up all my sufferings in a knot and put them in my heart's almiral. what a strong image to begin a great poem with Naseer tonight I am meloncoly and this is my mood exactly thank you brother.

even loneliness has her own feelings!

very well said poem and touches my heart................

I read and reread, the mood, feelings and expression all grip with their intensity, created through imagery that touches and moves. last lines end on a note, wihich lifts the poem to great heights and makes me totally identify with it. in wisdomful silence only loneliness should cry... Mamta

This is so expressive and so vivid with images. Thank you for sharing your talent. :) Another 10+

A beautifully well constructed poem with wonderful imagery and in the ending a realization for you. Karin Anderson

Your lines are stunning. Beautiful, poem...your work is amazing ^-^

wow! ....how easily you have described what i so often feel...the despair the hopelessness when those whom you suffer silently for do nothing to repay you..not even whisper some random sweet nothing.

existence is by only recognition...if no heart no mind no senses there to recognize you, you 'aren't' there...God given truth...apllicable to HIM as well! good piece 10

a poem that tells the wisdom of the past so emerging light of wisdom to wisdom...so fufilling to see what is life...as it goes...thank you my friend of sharing this to us...so rich in meaning..God bless

Sometime loneliness create such feelings.

engrossing...inner ambivalence well described

Great piece. This poem flows nicely. Its a deep topic, I love the way its all put together and you make even loneliness beautiful. good job