Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Friday, October 24, 2014

Why Do You Want To Destroy? Comments

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Ignorance in life is the key of superstition
For life style there is not at all restriction.
Modern foods to shelter and to also drink,
In all directions pollution impurities do sink.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2014

Parents cry out of agony children give pain, While they leave alone comes sorrow rain... nice lines some are thrown out of home never to care and welcome that is how we have changed and skillfully managed

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Ramesh Rai 04 December 2014

Why do you want to destroy your precious time? Oh lovers of money why do you cheat do crime? By addiction you destroy your body daily more, It reduces your life span in each birth from core. A great write with a great message.

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Dinesan Madathil 08 November 2014

Profundity has been crafted into a poem here and pearls of wisdom have been spilt here in all splendour. Excellent write sir... Go ahead on the same track.

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Lyn Paul 30 October 2014

I too admire your wisdom in these words. Fast food, fast lifestyle, no natural beauty given to our children in this crazy world. Thank you Mantu and welcome to PH

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Md Asadullah 25 October 2014

The ills of present day society beautifully brought out in this poem, thanks for the share :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 October 2014

great wisdom in this powerful write.

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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