Why Do You Show Me This Face? Comments

This poem had a sad ring to it, while AAARRRGGH! was written truly in jest. How-ever, there are days when I get up, and am so tired and really feeling my age that this one fits my feelings. Those are the days when I can't laugh about it and I miss my youth and abilities to do anything that I want. Thanks for sharing it with me! Loved it! Scarlett

Good poem! I have alot to learn from you. Thank You

the true beauty is not what you see... but hidden inside of thee... great poem alison...

why does the mirror has to be so cruel. i ask that seem question every day. this was a very well thought out piece of work, great imagery, coming from the mind is a wonderful thing and you did a great job with this one. I give it a ten.

A mirror can never show the real anyone but a poem make a good effort. Your's certainly does - a good honest look in the glass this shakes us out of the futility of living in the past.