Saturday, December 21, 2013

Why Do You Love Me? Comments

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Why do you love me?

Is it because of my charming smiles?
Do they really shine for miles?
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Fiona Schwartzinoff
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Sandra Feldman 08 January 2014

Very, very original and witty.Excellently and naturally written. It's read with joy and smiles and leaves a happy poetic, touche in our hearts. I love the ending. You will go far. Welcome to our club where I think, very soon you will be an honored member .You've got rhythm, you've got talent, who could ask for anything more? George Gershwin.

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