Why Do You Dwell In My Heart? Comments

The thread of your fantasy Will find a spool of cloud To wind around The orbit of my thoughts. Beautiful poem, so nicely penned.10+++ for the sharing.

The dream in my life Will be a sand bank A couch for you To repose upon. The thread of your fantasy Lovely romantic write, a great love poem shared. 10++++

My heart- A holy shrine for your soul, A wide global vision for your eye, A perpetual abode for your life and, A sweet home for you as a whole. A lovely poem shared sir. Thanks for it. 10++++

I know you love many things, You need a lot of them, Large, Broad, wide, vast, Diverse, smooth and sublime A poem so nicely penned. How you care the woman you love. 10++++ for it.

My heart- A holy shrine for your soul, A wide global vision for your eye, A perpetual abode for your life and, A sweet home for you as a whole. Nice poem. 10++++

A thoroughly enchanting write, full of depth and meaning. Great flow n rhythm. A reflection of a beautiful heart. A big 10.