Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Why Do You Cry! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

O ye men, why do you cry over thy death
Even the brightest star, the sun
Goes through the trouble and die every day.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 08 August 2021

This is another of your best enlightening poems. I like the spirit of hopefulness you have pured through this artpiece. Thankyou. Into my fav.

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T Rajan Evol 03 March 2016

And crying is really bad when we all know nothing can be done about it...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2016

Going through trouble every day and watching death near by man cries and why does he cry sometimes does not able to know. This is entirely thought provoking sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2016

Life and death! With the troubles faced on earth. Nice piece of work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 March 2016

Inspiring words MAN, you can motivate a dead stone.

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Kelly Kurt 03 March 2016

Indeed, it is beyond our control. Worry about it serves no positive purpose, yet is not rare.

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Brian Mayo 02 March 2016

Not bad. Your poem offers a measure of comfort, and puts things in perspective. You refer to forces outside of men's control, and death is certainly on that list. Excellent work.

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M. Asim Nehal

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