O ye men, why do you cry over thy death
Even the brightest star, the sun
Goes through the trouble and die every day.
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And crying is really bad when we all know nothing can be done about it...10
Going through trouble every day and watching death near by man cries and why does he cry sometimes does not able to know. This is entirely thought provoking sharing.10
Life and death! With the troubles faced on earth. Nice piece of work.
Indeed, it is beyond our control. Worry about it serves no positive purpose, yet is not rare.
Not bad. Your poem offers a measure of comfort, and puts things in perspective. You refer to forces outside of men's control, and death is certainly on that list. Excellent work.
This is another of your best enlightening poems. I like the spirit of hopefulness you have pured through this artpiece. Thankyou. Into my fav.