Why Do You Ask Why I Love You? Comments

Amazing, Aj. When I heard this in class I was blown away, I didn't know that you were so good at writing poems. Your way better then anyone I know at writing (well not Marilyn Manson) . talk to you later! Brandy

Aj, I really like this poem. It's sweet without being overly mushy. It sounds close to something a real person might say. I especially like the end of the second line, where you pause before adding, 'have been for a while.' It almost sounds like something you'd say under your breath or in your head while you're talking to the object of your obvious affection-like something you may be afraid to say out loud because you don't want to overwhelm her. Still, this is a great poem. Definitely and 'A.'

your poem is one of the best poems theat i have read in a long time. dont ever stop writting. nikki