Why Do We Fumble? Comments

We do tremble in fear! Because of the ways of life. Nice work.

A very clear rhythm throughout your poem, gives it an underlying feeling of agitation at the ignorance of people. They fumble their lives, searching for wealth, money, material things when they should be humbly gathering the virtues of this life. This poem has a spirituality all it's own, blended finely with your knowledge of the divine. A great poem Kumarmani, love it. Thank you for sharing it and also for reading and comment on my poem: Desirable Effects. RoseAnn

Very inspiring and a soulful poem......Kumarmani........the truth has been spelt out here with regards to our morality that is in stake in reality hence we fumble at things of honesty.........very well composed Sir