Saturday, February 7, 2009

Why Do I Love You This Much? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it the way you look at me with that look of ´´you are the one´´ you have?
Is it the way your hands take mine with such delicacy?
Or is it the way your lips touch mine with the agony of an inner love,
That makes me freeze when you walk around…
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Ana Z. M.
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mariee castrro 08 February 2009

wow ana, this is poem is WELL WRITTEN! ! its touching

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Bonnie Collins 08 February 2009

Ana, this is trully a beautifull write filled with so much love and expression of it.. It captures the heart of each and every reader I can asure you... Your wittings are absoluty getting soo much charactor.... Very very touching..... Bonnie

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Katelyn Dunham 07 February 2009

This is a charming and beautiful poem. If only the whole world could feel and love so deeply...

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Allan Macli Borges 07 February 2009

a beautiful composition, gathered with pure and soft love. thanks for sharing.

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

Check the third line from the bottom! I think this is simply a beautiful loving series of expressions about young love. A fresh love. A love of purity. The'first and best kind of love. The presentation was as soft in word and feel as the love itself. I hope it lasts. GW62

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Naidz Ladia 07 February 2009

this s a declaration of a true love...an honest, sincere love from you, ..u express ur emotion well...i like this poem of urs..cheers. naizz

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Sunflower Field 07 February 2009

That is very sweet poem I like it!

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Andrea Szyhowski 07 February 2009

It is very lovely, and sweet. And I'm glad you have someone to make you feel that way. Though in the following line, I think you have a typo: Will make you love you less than this, ~Nik

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Amy Ludidi 07 February 2009

Beautiful dedication..hope it is received as well as we have. Nicely writtten, style and maturity. Word

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young lady this is a breathtaking piece.

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Jennifer English 07 February 2009

Wow. Thats a brilliant poem. More upbeat then my stuff. Keep up the good work!

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Candace Quinton 07 February 2009

very good i will add u

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Yassar Ali 07 February 2009

10/10 loved it especially the 'The precious shape of your lips, sculpted with an artist’s hand on your face' keep up the great work

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