Sunday, September 20, 2009

Why Do I Comments

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Why do I write, why do I try
Because it bursts inside me
And screams to come out
This pen burns my hands
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Fiona Davidson
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Sue Sie 21 September 2009

If you didnt do these things and try others...you wouldnt be the person you are. We learn steps of life as we grow...Love and strength comes with the experiences we pick up on the way....A great write, honest, and questioning what we all need to know at times. Sue

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William Stoneberger 20 September 2009

love & life are mountains...and why do we climb them? because they are there. nice write here. thanks.

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Fay Slimm 20 September 2009

The bigger the heart the more vulnerable Fi... and you are bighearted of that I am sure - - so the risk in loving is that it sometimes hurts.... hugs and a 10 + + + for this excellent and honest piece..... from Fay.

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Sandra Martyres 20 September 2009

It is difficult to find answers to all the 'why' questions in our lives Fi, but as Carol says we carry on because we have hope...Lovely poem 10

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Catrina Heart 20 September 2009

True and well said sometimes I also ask myself the same questions as yours............Great and awesome piece! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++ your Best! ! !

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Carol Gall 20 September 2009

a good question why you do because you have hope

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