Thursday, January 29, 2009

~~~why Divide....? ? ? ? ~~~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon illuminates
World with silver rays
Make no division
Thatched roof or concrete roof tops
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Vinod Kumar 09 February 2009

There was a time of the age of Upanishat, there were no religion and ugly divisions Only Guru and desiples, conveying knowledge from the face of Guru. Now we need differend God Different Heaver and Hell. and Make More Devil Stone Idle for the crowd`s convenience to pelting stone. Thank you for the great sacred message.10+++

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Chitra - 02 February 2009

powerful write...an apt title...thought provoking

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C. P. Sharma 02 February 2009

In Nature there is abundance. Man privatises and monopolises and creates inequalities. A good write for natural justice. CP

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Menaka Liyanage 01 February 2009

A wonderful creation! ! Thinking power leads to this negative aspect- ‘division’ and it is the main cause for suffering. Realistic thoughts were gathered nicely in a rhythmic way. Well done!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 January 2009

This realistic poem should go beyond the skies and echoes to the deaf listeners.

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